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Published on Nov 18, 2015

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Advert Feedback

Twitter

  • "The advert is consistent with the CD with the polaroids which I like"
  • "A bit busy but that suits the theme"
  • "Really loved the cork board idea with the pins and the ghostbuster thing"
  • "Maybe make the doodles more clear"

Messaging

  • "I like the notice board idea... very original"
  • " I like the layout and the torn features"
  • "Maybe not have all 4 pictures in the top corner as it looks unbalanced"
  • "Maybe have the names of the people in the video i.e. 'featuring...'"
  • "It looks very professional"

Messaging

  • "It fits with the theme of your video"
  • "My eye is drawn to the camera instead of the date as it's further forward"
  • "I really love the photobooth photos, it goes well with the 'classic' theme
  • "It doesn't look too cluttered even though there aren't any blank spaces"

Face- to- face

  • "The ripped paper takes up a bit too much space at the top"
  • "It looks stylish"
  • "I really like the ripped paper, selotape and pins effects you've used"
  • "Maybe replace the classroom shot to one of the 'classic' girls"
  • "The words 'Classic' and 'MKTO' are bold and stand out."

Face- to- face

  • "I like the vintage look"
  • "My eyes are drawn to the Ghost Busters logo too much"

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