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Bad Writing

Published on Nov 19, 2015

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PRESENTATION OUTLINE

Learn to Spot

Bad Writing

Adverbs

Aren't your friend
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Crayola syndrome

Where more is better
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Cliche

When old isn't new
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Default to shorter words

Sad rather than melancholy

Avoid repetition

Use pronouns, sentence restructure rather than the same word/sentence
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Overview

  • Precise rather than vague
  • Graceful, not awkward
  • Not ambiguous, but clear
  • Fresh is better than clichéd
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quotation marks

for dialogue and not irony
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Exclamation points

for irony or playfulness
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Overused words

  • unique
  • literally - often used incorrectly
  • myself
  • particular
  • personally
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E.B. White Writing

apostrophes

  • mindful writing
  • plurals and apostrophes
  • ending in "s" and possessive?
  • singular or proper name ... add "s"
  • plural ending in "s" ... don't add

and of course contractions

  • you're = you are, it's = it is
  • possessive = its

Hyphens

  • evolution - base ball, base-ball, baseball
  • after prefixes ... un, self, ex, non, re
  • when? dictionary
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dash

  • colon substitute
  • in place of parentheses
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comma

  • Dependent phrase
  • Dependent clause with conjunction.
  • independent clause with conjunction
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Use an active voice
The dog licked the kid.

Avoid passive voice
The kid was licked by the dog.
Was

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If you can insert “by zombies” after the verb and it makes sense, it’s passive voice.

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