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Finding your (active) voice

Published on Nov 19, 2015

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PRESENTATION OUTLINE

Getting Active

ELIMINATING PASSIVE VOICE
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Active?

THE SUBJECT IS THE DO'ER
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Steve loves Amy

STEVE=SUBJECT AMY=OBJECT
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I=SUBJECT IT=OBJECT

I heard it through the grapevine

Passive

THE SUBJECT RECEIVES THE ACTION
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Amy is loved by Steve.

AMY=SUBJECT... BUT SHE'S NOT DOING ANYTHING
Photo by Mark Philpott

IT= PASSIVE SUBJECT

It was heard by me through the grapevine.

To be or not to be

"TO BE" ALERT

Active

I AM HOLDING A PEN.
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Passive

THE PEN IS BEING HELD BY ME.
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Amy is loved.

WHO IS THE MYSTERY GUY?
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Mistakes were made.

POLITICIANS' SECRET WEAPON!
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Crime reports

THE STORE WAS ROBBED.
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Somebody stole the cookies.

THE COOKIES WERE STOLEN.
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Zombies

USEFUL FOR FINDING PASSIVE VOICE
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She was killed

(BY ZOMBIES)
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I FELT LIKE I WAS DYING

BY ZOMBIES
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We were invited

BY ZOMBIES
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