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Published on Nov 09, 2016
ENG-105 Composition I
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Evidence and opinions
Examining and creating aRguments
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When Writing an Argument...
State your opinion --> THESIS
Know your audience-"What will they likely respond to?" and "What kind of language do you need to use to get your point across?"
Choose good evidence to support it-"Facts/Statistics ," "Statements from authorities/experts ," "Personal/emotional stories"
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What is Better: Opinions or Evidence?
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need BOTH to make an argument
You need BOTH to make an argument.
All opinion with no evidence = uniformed, irrational
All evidence with no opinion =information only
The key is to have good balance between the two!
Know the difference!
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Separating Opinion from Evidence
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Opinion=Subjective
I-statements concerning what you believe (however in you essay you will express it with third person narrative)
Modifiers - Adjective and Adverbs
Qualifiers-Some, most, all Should, could, might, must
Intensifiers-Very, extremely, really
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Evidence=Objective
Absolute & concrete
Can be proven
Supported by research or fact-finding
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Qualifiers
Create doubt or express “hedging” if you are trying to make reader reconsider facts/evidence
"Richard Nixon probably resigned because of Watergate."
"Richard Nixon resigned because of Watergate."
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Intensifiers
Words that limit or enhance characteristics of modifiers
Texting while driving is extremely dangerous.
Most people believe the rumors to be somewhat true.
It’s highly unlikely that the law will pass the Senate.
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Examples
OPINION: GCU is one of the best universities in the state.
EVIDENCE: Approximately 72,500 students attend GCU.
EVIDENCE: Classrooms at GCU are equipped with the latest technology.
OPINION: We should do more as a community to help students.
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EVIDENCE: Dr. Garcia, a leading expert on education, says that too many students fall behind.
OPINION: A student named Jake said he dropped out because his work schedule and family demands became too overwhelming.
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Remember For this Essay
Opinion and Evidence must go together
The claim in your thesis and subtopics are your stance (opinion using third person narrative)
The research is your evidence to back up your stance
AVOID writing an expository type essay that only explains the issues
CREATE a clear stance on your issue and only use evidence to SUPPORT
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Lastly, create a clear OPINION (thesis statement) with your own three reasons addressing your issue and only use EVIDENCE to support Your View.
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