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(ONLINE) Commentary Essay: Evidence and Opinions

Published on Nov 09, 2016

ENG-105 Composition I

PRESENTATION OUTLINE

Evidence and opinions

 Examining and creating aRguments

When Writing an Argument...

  • State your opinion --> THESIS
  • Know your audience-"What will they likely respond to?" and "What kind of language do you need to use to get your point across?"
  • Choose good evidence to support it-"Facts/Statistics ," "Statements from authorities/experts ," "Personal/emotional stories"
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What is Better: Opinions or Evidence?

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need BOTH to make an argument

  • You need BOTH to make an argument.
  • All opinion with no evidence = uniformed, irrational
  • All evidence with no opinion =information only
  • The key is to have good balance between the two!
  • Know the difference!

Separating Opinion from Evidence

Opinion=Subjective

  • I-statements concerning what you believe (however in you essay you will express it with third person narrative)
  • Modifiers - Adjective and Adverbs
  • Qualifiers-Some, most, all Should, could, might, must
  • Intensifiers-Very, extremely, really

Evidence=Objective

  • Absolute & concrete
  • Can be proven
  • Supported by research or fact-finding
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Qualifiers

  • Create doubt or express “hedging” if you are trying to make reader reconsider facts/evidence
  • "Richard Nixon probably resigned because of Watergate."
  • "Richard Nixon resigned because of Watergate."
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Intensifiers

  • Words that limit or enhance characteristics of modifiers
  • Texting while driving is extremely dangerous.
  • Most people believe the rumors to be somewhat true.
  • It’s highly unlikely that the law will pass the Senate.

Examples

  • OPINION: GCU is one of the best universities in the state.
  • EVIDENCE: Approximately 72,500 students attend GCU.
  • EVIDENCE: Classrooms at GCU are equipped with the latest technology.
  • OPINION: We should do more as a community to help students.

More Examples

  • EVIDENCE: Dr. Garcia, a leading expert on education, says that too many students fall behind.
  • OPINION: A student named Jake said he dropped out because his work schedule and family demands became too overwhelming.

Remember For this Essay

  • Opinion and Evidence must go together
  • The claim in your thesis and subtopics are your stance (opinion using third person narrative)
  • The research is your evidence to back up your stance
  • AVOID writing an expository type essay that only explains the issues
  • CREATE a clear stance on your issue and only use evidence to SUPPORT
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Lastly, create a clear OPINION (thesis statement) with your own three reasons addressing your issue and only use EVIDENCE to support Your View.

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