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Make Descriptions Creative

Published on Nov 20, 2015

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MORE DECKS TO EXPLORE

PRESENTATION OUTLINE

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THE BOY WEPT.

SOUNDS GENERIC, NO? GO ON...
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THE YOUNG CHILD WEPT.

BETTER? ITS MORE... INTERESTING.
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THE YOUNG CHILD WEPT POWERFULLY.

HERE IS A MORE DESCRIPTIVE ONE.
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WHILE THE YOUNG CHILD WEPT POWERFULLY...

START WITH A DIFFERENT WORD OTHER THAN 'THE'
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PASSIONATELY AND WITH GUSTO, THE YOUNG CHILD WEPT OUT OF SPITE.

HERE IS THE COMPLETION! SEE THE DIFFERENCE?

Jordan Tyo