Copy of Feedback by Lindsay Maughan

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Copy of Feedback

Published on Nov 22, 2015

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PRESENTATION OUTLINE

THE GOOD

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MODAL VERBS

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EMBEDDED QUOTES

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'WE' NOT 'I'

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THE BAD

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TELLING THE STORY

AND EXPLAINING WHAT TECHNIQUES ARE

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'ALSO' AS A SENTENCE OPENER

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WAFFLING IN ANALYSIS

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THE UGLY

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SPELLING

ALOT SHAKESPEAR

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NO EVIDENCE!

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NOT ZOOMING IN

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WRITER'S IDEAS

INTENTIONS, VIEWS, OPINIONS, ATTITUDES

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Lindsay Maughan

www.ukliteracy.wordpress.co.uk