Post-writing Assignment & Mrs. Parker’s lessons
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Post-writing Assignment & Mrs. Parker’s lessons
June Koo 2015 May 21
ESL Intro to Lit/Comp
First-person point of view & Rewrite the Chapter 30
Okay, first at all, I am going to start my post writing assignment.
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Characters
- Turtle Wexler
- Sam Westing
- Windy Airaghi (delivery girl)
- Jane Earthen (Chairman of Westing Paper Products Corporation)
- Sandy Waterman (one of heirs)
- Susan Firenze (a desk clerk of "sodavid tower")
Ch 30 : The end? Not yet!
View of Turtle Wexler:
I spent the night at the bedside of eighty-five-year old Julian R. Eastman.
Me, Turtle, as known as T.R, am thirty-seven years old now. I was the only one heir who got an inheritance, also, only one heir who may inherit the chairman of Westing Paper Products Corporation.
Sandy is a turning points of my life and he is the only one I trust.
At that time, we were talking about other heirs.
Then suddenly Sandy interrupted me and said, “Turtle?” So I said, “Yes, Sandy. I am here.” He had kept calling me. Then he said, “Turtle… tell Crow to pray for me.” I was hollering his name. “Sandy??...Sandy!” I felt hopeless. Yes, I was, also, I am.
Me, Turtle, as known as T.R, am thirty-seven years old now. I was the only one heir who got an inheritance, also, only one heir who may inherit the chairman of Westing Paper Products Corporation.
Sandy is a turning points of my life and he is the only one I trust.
At that time, we were talking about other heirs.
Then suddenly Sandy interrupted me and said, “Turtle?” So I said, “Yes, Sandy. I am here.” He had kept calling me. Then he said, “Turtle… tell Crow to pray for me.” I was hollering his name. “Sandy??...Sandy!” I felt hopeless. Yes, I was, also, I am.
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Planned to intrigue the Second Westing Game
2015
Fourth of July,
His hand turned cold, just very, very cold. He dead. The Westing Game is over now. Completely end.
I turned to the window. The sun was rising out of Lake Michigan. It was the Fourth of July.
“Thank you Sandy, thank you Mr. Eastman, thank you Northrup, thank you Westing and… rest in peace. It was an amazing time with you and reasonable game in my life.
Since today, I am planning to intrigue the Second Westing Game.
Carried on the style of your Westing Game, and I may inherit your talent of scheme for Second Westing Game. Thank you Windy Windkloppel, and good-bye my friend, Sandy”
2015 forth of july...
I turned to the window. The sun was rising out of Lake Michigan. It was the Fourth of July.
“Thank you Sandy, thank you Mr. Eastman, thank you Northrup, thank you Westing and… rest in peace. It was an amazing time with you and reasonable game in my life.
Since today, I am planning to intrigue the Second Westing Game.
Carried on the style of your Westing Game, and I may inherit your talent of scheme for Second Westing Game. Thank you Windy Windkloppel, and good-bye my friend, Sandy”
2015 forth of july...
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SODAVID TOWER
SODAVID TOWER seems like the pyramid in Egypt. This glittery, glassy apartment house stood alone on the Lake Michigan shore several stories high. One reasonable story high.
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Windy Airaghi
The letters were signed
The letters were signed Windy Airaghi.
The delivery girl was thirty-eight years old, and there was no such person as Windy Airaghi.
(((then give audience the letters)))
The delivery girl was thirty-eight years old, and there was no such person as Windy Airaghi.
(((then give audience the letters)))
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JANE EARTHEN FOUND DEAD
And
.
.
.
.
“I would like to invite you to the Earthen Game. Also, play the game against 16 heirs (tenants of SODAVID Tower). Then beat your opponents, and you may inherit my estate.
From
-Jane Earthen-
Earthen Game's clues
- The letters were signed Windy Airaghi.
- JANE EARTHEN FOUND DEAD
- • Sandy Waterman
- • Jane Earthen
- • Susan Firenze
- elemental triangles
- SODAVID TOWER (seems like the pyramid in Egypt)
SODAVID TOWER
Star of David
First, sodavid tower is the acronym of Star of David
Do you guys remember that I mentioned that SODAVID TOWER seems like the pyramid in Egypt??
Pyramid's shape of structure is triangle
and triangle is represent fire in Stat of David.
Therefore I decided the answer of the game is
"Susan Firenze" the name includes fire.
Do you guys remember that I mentioned that SODAVID TOWER seems like the pyramid in Egypt??
Pyramid's shape of structure is triangle
and triangle is represent fire in Stat of David.
Therefore I decided the answer of the game is
"Susan Firenze" the name includes fire.
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Conclusion
The Westing Game is not over yet
Therefore, my conclusion of this chapter is the westing game is not over yet.
Process
First at all, I was wondering about the assignment that I chose.
-Which chapter will be the most interesting part if I changed the setting and stories?
-What it would happened if I change the ending of the Westing Game?
Then I choose to rewrite about chapter 30 by view of turtle wexler.
-Which chapter will be the most interesting part if I changed the setting and stories?
-What it would happened if I change the ending of the Westing Game?
Then I choose to rewrite about chapter 30 by view of turtle wexler.
First-person point of view
Okay, first, through this project, I spent my time to think about what are the good ways to write "first-person point of view story"
It is really hard to explain the descriptions of character in first-person point of view story.
And I emailed to Mrs Parker then she gave me some advices.
First, Do not writing the story to explain everything to reader. Just let the stories go smoothly.
Secondly, just think that you are the narrator, which means that the story is about your story.
It is really hard to explain the descriptions of character in first-person point of view story.
And I emailed to Mrs Parker then she gave me some advices.
First, Do not writing the story to explain everything to reader. Just let the stories go smoothly.
Secondly, just think that you are the narrator, which means that the story is about your story.
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How can I come up with the title
-"The end? Not yet!"-
As my chapter name is "The end? Not yet!" I spent some times to think about the chapter's name.
Mrs Parker told me that when she is titling a chapter, she often wait until it is written, then she go through the chapter and look for a theme.
Therefore, I want to contain the meaning that the westing game is not end yet.
Mrs Parker told me that when she is titling a chapter, she often wait until it is written, then she go through the chapter and look for a theme.
Therefore, I want to contain the meaning that the westing game is not end yet.
Which things were hard to comp up with…
were
the view points of turtle, and
How can I change Ending to starting, and
How can I make some interesting clues.
Lastly, the name of characters and settings of Earthen game.
the view points of turtle, and
How can I change Ending to starting, and
How can I make some interesting clues.
Lastly, the name of characters and settings of Earthen game.
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What could I learn through this project.
The efforts of Author and process of Authorship.
I learned more knowledge about authorship and how book published.
I learned more knowledge about authorship and how book published.
Also...
I am very honored to have some time to talk with Mrs. Parker and thanks to her advices. Also I really appreciate to Mrs. Ailor for gave us this interesting assignment and chances to think about and to try our author assignment.
Thanks to your advice I was able to finished this project!
Thanks to your advice I was able to finished this project!
Thank you :)
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