Proportion
Logical Sequence
Coherence (flow)
Rhythm
Proportion: do you have the right amount of each section? Rough guide, 10%+ intro, 10% context, 10%- conclusion.
Logical sequence: do you start with a first principle and explain it, step by step, so anyone can follow you? Remember with original research no one else has ever been this way before.
Coherence: Does it hang together? Does each part follow on, and flow forward? If not, have you given your reader a bridge (a simple "However" or more).
Rhythm: The best academic writing has something else about it. Sometimes it has narrative tension. Sometimes it has elegant cadences. Sometimes it is snappy and crystal clear. It has style, it has clarity and grace. (Read Helen Sword, or William Colomb for more).